Deeds Of Unstable Minds Poem by Jaishree Nair

Deeds Of Unstable Minds

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Amidst the young seeking the solace of affection...
the talons of self-centered vanity.

Amidst the procession of honey oozing words...
the venom of invisible deadly drops...

Amidst the blossoms of love's fragrance...
the repulsive stench of putrid flesh...

Amidst the caressing arms of cool friendship...
the talons of hidden hostility..

Amidst the divine showers of mercy...
the flood of barbaric savagery...

The path of life's journey
smeared with the deeds of unstable minds!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

You have listed all the polarities of this bipolar world. Well written, M'm.

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Rajnish Manga 09 July 2016

You have presented the good and the bad aspects of human nature face to face. Shocking. Amidst the divine showers of mercy... the flood of barbaric savagery...

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Kelly Kurt 09 July 2016

A profound and emotional write, Jaishree

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