Deep Freeze Poem by Sandra Feldman
Deep Freeze
I march
Thru the snow,
Limbs frozen
Heart frozen
Hope frozen,
Not knowing where,
To go!
Cold,
No love to light
A fire,
Or even crack a smile,
No fireplace to say,
"Stay a while"
No love,
Life finally fails,
Those who,
Love has Lost,
Along the way
By bitter frost.
A lovely poem, Sandracita. Come visit snow-less Florida - beautiful weather just now - but stay away in hurricane season. No place and no person is perfect. Alas!
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CONTINUED: the smallest tragedy, as a remedy for my bitter smile. Your poem is marvelous, dear Sandra! ! A 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++ and Full Vote. I like your inner humor very much, a God's Gift, sure. He Blesses YOU in abundance.
I so admired your poetry that I instantly write a brevity my Love was not Lost, Along the way By bitter frost but mine was lost all the while with a bitter smile..................Your poetry is so enjoyable, constantly with thought-provoking one, it oft invites me to write here...........
my typo, sorry: Latest alinea: The with must be erased and there must come an a. Thank YOU.
Lost love is more painful than deep freeze. Clear and well written!
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4/26/2024 5:50:23 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Your words send shivers down my spine and pinch my soul. Awesome and heart touching.