Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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Deep In Love

Rating: 4.8

Why I am so deep in love and called mad?
Why give people chance to call me mad?
Failure in love attempts and feel so sad,
Always get thrashing from kind dad,

It was not complicate but simple love,
Sailing on water like duck and dove,
Getting to know better of her but not to have,
Driving me crazy as she never forgave,

Was it simple attraction or infatuation?
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Nagesh Ratnavelu 17 September 2009

It was not delicate but simple love, Sailing on water as duck and dove, Getting to know better but not behave, Driving me crazy as she never forgave,

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Twinkle Vohra 17 September 2009

Why I am so deep in love and called mad? Give people chance to call me mad, Failure in attempts and feel so sad, Always get thrashing from kind dad,

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Sagarika Shah 17 September 2009

Was it simple attraction or infatuation? Confronted many but confused with question, Was I running out of time?

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Sita Kesri 08 September 2009

Failure in attempts and feel so sad, Always get thrashing from kind dad, ......10

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Ramdulari Sinha 08 September 2009

Why I am so deep in love and called mad? Give people chance to call me mad, ...10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 January 2015

Ouu love. I love the topic of love. 9 hours ago by Chloe Brink to Deep in love

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 January 2015

Yasss! ! ! ! And why do people think that when young people say they are in love that it is a mere crush and not a serious long-term emotion? WHY? ! ? ! 9 hours ago by Liliana Lopez to Deep in love

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 January 2015

A Beautiful poem on deep love with fantastic lines.. Those are unlucky who fail and not face, without knowing what joy is there in losing the race, they call others stupid and mad, whom would you actually call good or bad? Very true said, there is also a joy in loosing, atleast after attempting it. Loved reading it.

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Venkat Ramanna 18 September 2009

Was it simple attraction or infatuation? Confronted many but confused with question, Was I running out of time?

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K.v. Subbarao 18 September 2009

Why I am so deep in love and called mad? Give people chance to call me mad,

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