I could feel the dew caressing my sides
As I chewed merrily upon an unopened dandelion.
It was pitch black in the valley below
But blackness gave way to a grey sky the other way
As the sun began to make its morning climb.
I jumped high above the wheat and ran towards the wooded hill
To await the warmth that surely would come.
I glided through the old fence making sure to avoid the metal barbs.
And was on the hill as the first orange rays lit up the glade.
I shuddered to release a few remaining droplets from my coat
The sun bathing me in delight,
I let out a loud grunt to summon in the day.
Fully warmed I vanished into the safety of the woods
The poem is a nice experience In the pulse of a deer, experimental
A beautiful poem embracing nature and the dawn of a new day, a poem of nature and senses with elements of a dream fantasy; a collection of experiences in nature spun into a meditative reality, a nature of desired nurturing comfort, ending in a warm vanishing ' into the safety of the woods'.
A beautiful poem. The superb imagery of this write made me at close range with this wonderful animal. Well crafted and conveyed.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I wrote the poem 'Suspended Night Woods Safety Dawn Wakes', inspired by the poem 'Deer Morning', by the poet Paul T P Burne and dedicated to the poet Paul T P Burne.