Desire Love Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Desire Love

Rating: 2.5


Be still
Temptations teasing
Seeking to release seed
From thighs heated
And the roar of thunder
Shakes
To satisfying heights

Cry in silence

Discipline the need
To waste regrettably
Desire love
And not lust
To come
From one whose heart
Is given

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ordinary Sandra 21 October 2009

Dear Sir, I think if someone has find the truth and the meaning of life, whatever many temptations may come, they will get out easily and be a winner. I think we should cry sometimes because we have many burden to carry, but be optimist and build our positive mind. That's important. Well, i'm still learning. I think all people in this planet also need to learn and try to have a positive mind and behavior. That's the challenge sir. Good luck.

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