Desperate Poem by Dorsey Baker

Desperate

Rating: 4.0


you have got a wildfire
burning
in your body
honey in your lips
baby come
give me some

you have got so much
sweetness
so much warmth
baby come
give me some


my heart is
so full of pain
my eyes so full
of tears
I desperately
need your love
to comfort me
baby come
give me some

Tuesday, November 3, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deluke Muwanigwa 04 November 2020

Nice one. Turn it into a song she will definitely come

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Khairul Ahsan 04 November 2020

'baby come give me some' - hope she does!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 03 November 2020

A well authored piece. Truly sweet and poetic...5 stars *****

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