Desultoriness Poem by Smoky Hoss

Desultoriness

Rating: 5.0


The vagaries of experience and emotion
Carry such weight, like waves of might,
Whose strength is in the waters of the ocean -
There is one who knows the flows of life best
And moves through it all,
The rises, the falls, the work and the rest -
All that we are, and feel
Absurdity and necessity,
Living metaphors of truth so real -
The human affinity to find the Inexplicable
Courts the call of it all,
Through days and nights, seeming so typical -
The greatly troubled human incongruity
Is mystically found and bound,
Within each human heart beat, filled with the blood of Divinity -

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cosmic Dreamer 02 February 2012

A great poem showing an imaginative grasp of the English language... A joyful read my friend... Well done.

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Patti Masterman 01 February 2012

I really understand this (I think) . Especially that divinity part. And you know, it seems like the fact humans exist at all is proof of miracles..the last two lines are perfect and beautiful, methinks ;)

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Juan Olivarez 30 January 2012

Yes so true, the blood of divinity in mankind, if only we could apply it correctly. Great write my friend, absolutely great.

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Dave Walker 29 January 2012

Like it, a great poem, great write.

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Eric Cockrell 28 January 2012

very good, loved the last line!

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