Dewdrops Poem by anais vionet

Dewdrops

Rating: 5.0


Oh, shrill lark, just breathe. You rage too well.
Seek no comfort in wretchedness.

Renounce the gossamer moon, curse starlight
with a breathless voice - if you must - but let love be.

As the saddest tale fades after telling,
undistinguishable kisses fade like dewdrops.

Seasons alter, you will love again and love better
laughing unabashed, at the memory of this gentle injury.

Monday, August 22, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: romance,broken heart,teen,hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 23 August 2022

OOPS! ! Here is a retraction re my earlier comment: 'undistinguishable' in my first comment was supposed to be 'indistinguishable'!

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anais vionet 23 August 2022

sure, but those didn't have the right feel - too modern

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Bri Edwards 23 August 2022

Use 'undistinguishable'. Use 'unabashedly'. I like much prefer what I call your story-poems. ;)

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anais vionet 23 August 2022

Ilike the story poems better too. Thanks

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Kim Barney 22 August 2022

Good stuff. Five stars.

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