Adryan Barnathan


Diamonds In The Rough - Poem by Adryan Barnathan

Into the caverns of space and time
we are the keepers of great stories
like priceless jewels
buried in dark layers of soil and stone
we are here to live and love
and assist others by creating
new visions to inspire

What kind of world we live in tomorrow
depends upon the stories we weave
today
We are the light that shines
to guide those who will live after us


Copyright ©2006


Comments about Diamonds In The Rough by Adryan Barnathan

  • (5/16/2006 2:23:00 PM)


    We are the custodians not just of past success but bear the burden of mistakes from which we never learn.Why should we not be optimistic and encourage our contemporaries to continue and wear the mantel of our Best endeavours.
    You are singing my tune Adrienne.
    Respect - Sid John.
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  • (5/11/2006 11:57:00 PM)


    i fully wholeheartedly agree!

    u.xxx
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  • (5/11/2006 11:21:00 PM)


    refreshing, A. & what stories we hold in the deep of our cores...refined into diamonds over the years..? i'd like to think. (Report) Reply

  • (5/11/2006 10:47:00 PM)


    Aisha. It is ironic that I just commented on your poem, ''The way you smell''
    UR 2 counted in.
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  • (5/11/2006 10:37:00 PM)


    This is beautiful. I don't count myself as one of those you mention, but I am honoured to be among them! Peace, Aisha (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 11, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 10, 2006


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