Did You-I Did Poem by Naida Nepascua Supnet

Did You-I Did

Rating: 4.5


Did you ever try to shout
To the top of your lungs
Till you run out of breath
The tears show your fears?
I did.
Did you ever run
Till your lungs burn
And your legs ache
Cause your dreams break?
I did.
Because I'm sad
Because I'm broken
And I am mad
My pain unspoken.
I just cried, cried hard
Till my tears ran out
Sat flat, unmoved
And the pain got out.
Did you?
I did.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
CB Carlos 22 September 2011

I wish I could. I wish I DID. wow. I like this poem! :)

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Ency Bearis 31 August 2011

Impressive and interesting verses

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Jim Troy 13 August 2011

Take it to the limit one more time (The Eagles) ..........I did.......Great one....I love it... Jim Troy

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Eric Cockrell 20 June 2011

live hard... or dont bother! like this one a lot!

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Bernadette Inocencio 26 March 2011

just like the old times huh.....i got it...

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 August 2015

Did you ever try to shout To the top of your lungs Did you ever run Cause your dreams break? I just cried, cried hard Till my tears ran out Sat flat, unmoved And the pain got out. Did you? I did. with what a conviction and certainty you say i did, i did, i did. such a woman poetess i see rarely. thank you for this greatness in character. God bless you

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Amitava Sur 04 July 2015

An outburst of accumulated pains and strife, very poignant but truthful expression

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Marvin Brato 28 October 2013

Clever write....doing things that is extra human to let go of the pain is remarkable...we have to do it!

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Jono Casuyon 28 July 2013

I love it, well said. :)

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Lalkrishna Varavoor 13 November 2012

indeed i did. well done.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet

Naida Nepascua Supnet

bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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