Did You-I Did Poem by Naida Nepascua Supnet

A very nice way of expressing one's feeling thru a poem. Beautiful. Short but overflowing in thought.

I did. These moments make us stronger.

Interesting concept you have.

this poem makes me imagine myself doing just that. this is a beautiful poem, really. +10

Fantastic flow and rythm throughout all except the first stansa, which just didn't do it for me. I love the concept though and the feeling you have put into it. Kind Regards Gyp's

Did you ever try to shout To the top of your lungs Did you ever run Cause your dreams break? I just cried, cried hard Till my tears ran out Sat flat, unmoved And the pain got out. Did you? I did. with what a conviction and certainty you say i did, i did, i did. such a woman poetess i see rarely. thank you for this greatness in character. God bless you

An outburst of accumulated pains and strife, very poignant but truthful expression

Clever write....doing things that is extra human to let go of the pain is remarkable...we have to do it!

I love it, well said. :)

indeed i did. well done.