Did You See Poem by Susheela Alexiose

Did You See

Rating: 4.8


Eagle, Eagle, who rest upon the mountain top
Did you see my daddy passing by?

Oh thick white clouds, high up above the sky
Did you see my daddy looking down in search of me
When you took him along with you?

Oh my angel, my sweet little angel
Did my daddy ask you about me
When you carried him on your wings?

Years and months passed by
Still your daughter cries-all alone

Daddy, my sweet darling daddy
Can't you hear me calling you
Daddy, my dearest darling daddy
When we'll meet again?

Thursday, October 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 29 October 2018

Daddy, my sweet darling daddy Can't you hear me calling you Daddy, my dearest darling daddy.. oh my angels in the heavens and the eagles in the sky, did u see my daddy. such a wonderful imagination and expression of love..... you seem to have such lovely mother and father. thank u. tony When we'll meet again? Oh angels in the heavens, the eagle in the sky...... did u see my daddy wandering among l

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Bharati Nayak 27 October 2018

Wow- - A sad and poignant poem that touches the core of my heart.Recently I have lost my father and I can feel as if you have written it for me.Let me quote from the poem- - Eagle, Eagle, who rest upon the mountain top Did you see my daddy passing by? Oh thick white clouds, high up above the sky Did you see my daddy looking down in search of me When you took him along with you?

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Latha Fletcher 21 October 2018

So sad the poem is. Made me cry. But very good

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 October 2018

Dear Susheela, such a touching poem......10+++++++++++++

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 19 October 2018

A sweet emotional poem.Well done.

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