Die With Me. Poem by Aden Orie

Die With Me.

Rating: 4.5


Forever,
Is such a long time, time to waste, time that’s going no matter what
The facts of life are that people die
But alone, not I
I need your warm breath gracefully blowing on my shoulder
I need another walk to remember
Another time that I can look back on
A fulfilled dream just upon
Memories
I can have them with you
And I want you to
Die,
With me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Hooson 22 June 2008

good poem short but strong i really like it and the first 2 lines i wrote scare me cos im not usually that smart to right satuff lyk that lol

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Lisa Sargent 11 June 2008

love this poem. my favorite.

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Tyease Collins 09 May 2008

i absolutely love this poem...so deep and full of meaning. Good Job Tyease

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Jade Fish 09 May 2008

that's like really good! ! ! i love it...

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Annie Girl 08 May 2008

nice poem and also nice choice of words.

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Bella Hernandez 19 November 2011

Beautiful poem! exactly what i feel everyday! you completely capture what so many people are searching for in their lives great job Aden :) ~Bella

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Mohammed Albalushi 14 December 2008

' I can have them with you And I want you to Die, With me ' alot feelings in this words, very nice poem, welldone my friend, wish u all the best

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Aijaz Asif 13 October 2008

a very beautiful composition indeed...thanks 10

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Alexander Hale 12 October 2008

this is a great poem, beautifully written. +10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 September 2008

Die with me is a beautiful composition. Love it.

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