Discourses Xii ‘me And You’ Poem by Sadiqullah Khan

Discourses Xii ‘me And You’

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6/4/2009

Monday, April 6, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naidz Ladia 07 April 2009

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...where are the words here..? discourses are written or spoken communication...since it is spoken, so it is not written..and that's why, there's no words here...can i consider this as an abstract? my gosh....this is a very difficult work ha...of course before you did this, you were thinking of so many appearances of a good poem....so, this is the best... naizz

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I keep loosing my comment to you...I'll have to be brief...which is a bit apropos, considering the nature & length of your latest! ...A nexus connecting love or infinity ....perhaps.....and if not....i tried.....Abstractively Unique, my friend! A Poem without words....hmmmmm............................. ...F ......J .........R

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Hmmmm.....I think i've got the gist, here, Sadi.....'Dis Course of yours got lost on somewhere on Poetica Path, and fell DIS-tantly off its COURSE, while on its way to become another one of your captive, and substancs-filled pennings......Yes, No...I don't know...But DIS, of COURSE, will jus' be 'tween ME & YOU.... Very Abstract....2 souls connecting, perhaps, as they, like a perfect celestial nightscape, are aligned and nexused as one network of spark? ....Definitely Abstract, indeed ...................................0 0 0 0 0 0 (*) 0 0 0 0 0 X................................. _____________________________(+) _____________________________ ......................664+113=INRI...(+) ..(+) USEJHAISSEM(+) ..............................................pAx................................................... F ...J .....R

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Catrina Heart 06 April 2009

lot of things to convey in an empty page

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Indira Babbellapati 06 April 2009

yes, what discourse can there be...

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