Diseased Love Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

Diseased Love

Rating: 5.0


You sweetly utter my name
But you love another dame

Your love I know
Is only for a show

Your kisses on my lips
Excites hatred that sips

Your touch on my skin
Is like a penetrating pin

Your hugs on my hip
Is like anaconda's grip

You can not fool me now
I shall forget you somehow

This foolish love is a disease
That has to to be cured to cease

Is the only way this hurting pain
Can vanish with freedom to gain

Tuesday, April 29, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: hurting
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 08 May 2008

a diseased love isn't any worth. let it go deceased! a simple but strong expressive poem, marvin...

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Aaron Tate 08 May 2008

Ah, luster.. Awesome write, provokitive.

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Subbaraman N V 06 May 2008

A beautiful expression of love of undependable person!

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Viola Grey 06 May 2008

'your touch on my skin is like a penetrating pin' love is so often akin to pain, I liked this alot.

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Catherine Rica Cosico 05 May 2008

Must forget her...Shes's not worth it.

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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