Disharmony🌊 Poem by Nicola (IG Nicola_JustMe) Pillai

Disharmony🌊

Rating: 4.7


Uneasy in her silence
Vulnerable and bare
His words cut so deep
She struggled not to care

Pensive for a moment
She felt inadequate, yet free
Taking time to reflect
On the woman, she'd come to be

The strength she'd sought so desperately
Showed up a little too late
Devoid of any resolve
Perhaps she'd met her fate

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luis Estable 21 January 2021

This is well-written. The language is not complicated, but what this poem gives is good. I like how easy the verses flow when read out loud. Good read.,

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Chinedu Dike 20 April 2021

A poignant bit of a verse nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 February 2021

Having read the title, indeed so well put. Profound poem.Congratulations on being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day!

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Kostas Lagos 21 January 2021

Really good poem

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Unnikrishnan E S 21 January 2021

Wonderful poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 January 2021

A well expressed poignant poem.

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