** Disillusioned With God ** Poem by ANJALI SINHA
** Disillusioned With God **
You refused to strike
A foe, which was mirror to me.
You forced my ego to bow
that was dear to me.
Your denied me a wish
that was harmful to me
You stopped me on a path
Whereon I slipped with glee.
You forced my legs to trudge
When evil chained my knees,
You forced my soul to pray
Whilst lips hurled abuses on thee.
How you dare to give,
Honey to a bee
Who wants to be drowned in
A sorrow filled sea.
Anjali
17-09-2009
a lovely poem... but it is your choice to accept the gift or not... but before you accept it you MUST understand it to have the full happy and wonderful experience of it... take my word... a lovely poem...
God is always guiding us Anju... understand our weaknesses too that's why I love your thoughts here.. so honest...and full of humility we are just human to be acting that way..but God is always here to guide us...we are human but God is here to light our mind to do the right thing and your piece says it all... God is always helping us to stride in a straight path..if possible..(smile) i love this piece Anju...a piece with divine touch food for thoughts... 10++++ Lovelots, Maia
after so long someone i totally get! love the poem. its beautiful. sent a shiver down my spine. cant really say much else! thanks for sharing.
It was so far the best of the lot of poems u have written. Rhythm mingles with thoughts. Beautiful, excellent. Really, very touching... especially the last line. Disillusionment cannot create such a great poem. It is a positive outlook of life
'You forced my legs to trudge When evil chained my knees, You forced my soul to pray Whilst lips hurled abuses on thee'. Beautiful poem. Well penned I like it lot. Thanks for sharing with me
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 12:51:59 AM # 1.0.0
There is no dissillusion with your poems and this one is indeed no acception the ending was wonderful, it makes us think hard of God and all his guidence +++++++++++10 regards