Flowers of love
blossom in air of faith-
Divine oxygen
Plants of love
watered with mutual trust-
bear fruits of joy
Cactii of passion
fed with fertilizer of lies-
bears thorns of woes
Anjali
30-06-2009
You have described Love life in just 9 lines. You have a way with words. Terrific selection. To sum up: Its Just Beautiful.................20/10
Love, faith, trust and deceit, all interwoven in a pretty scene! A master at work.
great sensitivity and maturity in understanding of love. lovely Haiku. 10++ Mamta
Flourishing flower that fills the garden with love both horizontal and vertical.
ANJU, YOU CREATE AN AMAZING ONE. YOU TEACH US THAT LIKE A ROSE LOVE HAS A THORN AND YOU GIVE THE MESSAGE TO THE MEMBERS. I DEDICATE THIS LINE: LOVE GIVES US NOTHING EXCEPT SORROW
A THOUGHTFUL PHILOSOPHY ON 'LOVE'! ALSO A LESSON FOR ALL OUR ASPIRING LOVERS! 10! -Raj Nandy
even before I open the poem I knew I wont be disappointed.... not everyone can write Haiku! ! - they are more difficult than they seem...thanks to poets like you...we get to enjoy so elevated form of poetry
......Love blossom in air of faith..Wonderful thoughts..Small is beautiful.This is poetry..I can wait for such lovely words...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice way of describing love.... through flowers.. and how love should be and what you are expecting when in love? awesome.. trust, mutual understanding etc...