Disintegration Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Disintegration

Rating: 4.5


The whole facade fell apart
A rain of sawdust on all
Nothing remained, no remains

Friday, February 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siddartha Montik 01 July 2017

Nothing remained, no remains ..simple and short expression with such depth! ! 10+++!

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Muhammad Ali 19 August 2016

this is our boundary to deliver...nothing remains no remains. here is 'nothing' that is Something we admit. is there a way to say 'absolute no thing'! poem is very nice

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Akhtar Jawad 10 February 2016

Zindigi keya hay anasir mein zahoore tarteeb, Maut keya hay inhi ajza ka pareeshan hona. (Pandit Brij Narayan Chakbast Lucknowi)

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Rajnish Manga 28 April 2016

ज़िंदगी क्या है अनासिर में ज़हूरे तरतीब / मौत क्या है इन्हीं अजज़ा का परीशां होना.... शुक्रिया जनाब.

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Khairul Ahsan 05 February 2016

This poem is indeed a beauty. So short, yet so penetrating! A perfect picture of disintegration! Full marks-10/10.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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