Displacement Poem by subodh pandey

Displacement

Rating: 4.0


o' where are the shudders of spine
brought by the cold air
you are robbed by time, may be
the endearing curiosity of a child,
at the edge of the star, someone plays flute,
peebles left at shore by flowing water,
herds of cows coming back to calves at dusk
amidst all, bereaved you breathe
and in you vibrates the unlaid poem.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Oliver 24 May 2016

Ah dear Doctor - this breathes the air of the Rg Vedas exquisite

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Heather Wilson 27 May 2012

Imagination working hard there, a good one

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Crisa Earley 01 February 2012

Your poetry has a lot of imagery, I love it. Again well done!

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