1 Haiku Poem by subodh pandey

I like it. Simple, yet, sweet.

yes, indeed. you have sense of haiku, how did you learn it? i like it.

this is a very good haiku

Nice imagery in this haiku, Subodh...10

Beautiful train of thought nicely encapsulated and well brought forth. Thanks for sharing Subodh.

natural realisation into brevity postulate

good haiku with vivid imagery

Good haiku style to paint a picture of a scene with such tranquility.

Thank you, I could feel the poem's richness, lovely write!