Distance is never a distance
As of me
On every nucleus of each cell
Scripted your name
The beats of my heart
Stop to listen to your steps
The soft sun light and the sweet breeze
Murmur the eternal music
My heart is filled with love
Like the sky has no limit
Unfathomable as an ocean
Like a nectar dropped to eternity.
Lovely poem. Loved the imagery. Words seem to flow from your heart flawlessly. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.
Words of appreciation from you so valuable for me.Thank you so much.
The soft sun light and the sweet breeze Murmur the eternal music My heart is filled with love....lovely expression. An endearing poem.
Thank you poets Madathil Rajendran Nair, Robert Murray Smith and Suratha Kumar Rout for your kind appreciation of this poem.
The soft sun light and the sweet breeze Murmur the eternal music My heart is filled with love Like the sky has no limit Unfathomable as an ocean Like a nectar dropped to eternity Wow...what a poem! really fantastic 10+++++
This is such a lovely short poem. Often a world is caught in a dew drop. Your poem does the same, particularly with the ending lines. (10)
The soft sun light and the sweet breeze Murmur the eternal music My heart is filled with love........................................... there are some moments in life when we feel a serene calm and an inexpressible joy when we are filled with love. If the ambiance also is sweet, they become heavenly moments! Enjoyed your poem.... Bharati!
Thank you dear Madam for your beautiful words of appreciation.In spite of the pain in your hands you still typed your comments on this poem.It shows your great heart and also love for poetry Many thanks. Pray God tht your hand is healed quickly.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The soft sun light and the sweet breeze Murmur the eternal music My heart is filled with love i love these lines. there is so much of emotion, love, passion, desire in your poem. thank you dear Bharati
It is such a pleasure to read your comments.Thank you so much.