Divine Shloka - For Unnikrishnan S. Menon, Dr Geeta R. Menon And Dr K. Swain Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Divine Shloka - For Unnikrishnan S. Menon, Dr Geeta R. Menon And Dr K. Swain

Rating: 5.0


Poets have lined the streets
Men women and children
Musicians and dancers
Artistes jugglers buskers

The full moon is glowing
And the stars are shining
Menon writing shloka
Such a brilliant fourth line

Geeta weaving third line
Masterful tapestry
Doctor Swain's train of thought
Second line toughly fought

Just one more line to go
The crowd is now screaming
Want to see complete show
A meaningful shloka

The three poets confer
The honour must now go
To poet with pure heart
And such a soulful mind

Now such peaceful silence
From crowd of great respect
Poets are searching sky
'The Word' completes shloka

Saturday, June 25, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: lessons of life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sincerest thanks to Unnikrishnan S. Menon for introducing me to shloka.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 16 June 2026

You have sincerely appreciating your fellow poets, Unnikrishnan S, Dr.Geeta R.Menon and Dr.D.K Swain.They were very active poets writing marvelous poems.For some reason I do not find their new posts.

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Richard Wlodarski 20 June 2026

2) cont'd: Yes, Bharati, I too have not been able to find their new posts. I concur with your assessment of them. Hopefully, the situation will be resolved soon because I had really enjoyed their poetry and the communication.

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Richard Wlodarski 20 June 2026

Bharati, these poets, and you and others, deserve to have tribute poems written to them. In this case, it was quite a challenge as it was my first time being introduced to shloka. Thank you kindly for the 5 Stars.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 June 2026

Wondrous words! Amazingly composed. Five Stars!

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Richard Wlodarski 20 June 2026

THANK YOU so very much, Sylvia! I had really enjoyed writing this challenging poem. Your very positive comments and 5 Stars show me that I've done a good job.

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Pootoka 26 June 2022

A sign that you're a beginner poet, is writing about other amateurs.

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