Divinities Poem by M.J. Lemon

Divinities

Rating: 5.0


When words came
they slithered down the lane
arrived silent
in the night
but kicked down the door
at 3a.m. to announce themselves

Should they pause to
ring the doorbell
they don't just stop at one
ding
but make sure
to play a melody

downstairs to confront
the intruders I found
myself welcomed
in my own home
that became
some brave new world

When they visit
should they visit
expect they might
wish to bolt
keep them engaged, give them voice
these guest who must never leave

Friday, March 13, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: inspiration,muse,poetry,writing
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It's about inspiration.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 15 March 2020

I like your very novel and original take on inspiration! It sounds like it is about inspiration making a call on Poe or Stephen King! Or maybe I feel darkness because it is 2: 15 in the morning and the wind is howling and the house is creaking. I give this a 10 and a spot on my fav list cuz it's a jewel of a poem

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Mj Lemon 15 March 2020

Thank you so much, Susan. Yes, I was thinking of Lenore when I first drafted a version of this some time ago. Inspiration is both dark and 'light'....I tried to make the dark shine through.

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Mj Lemon 19 September 2020

Kumarmani, So very much appreciated!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 September 2020

When they visit should they visit expect they might wish to bolt keep them engaged, give them voice these guest who must never leave..... impressive concluding. Visited time and again.

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Savita Tyagi 09 May 2020

These guests are so unpredictable! And so easy for them to leave hen you wish to hold on to them.......great poem on inspiration.....thank you so much for reading my poem.

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Mj Lemon 10 May 2020

And thank you, Savita!

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 March 2020

Some call it Muse, some hunch, some inspiration, or as you say divinities, but they bring in great messages, of art, poetry, new inventions, ideas, and the like. Great stuff dear poet.

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Mj Lemon 30 March 2020

May the messages continue to inspire! Thank you so very much Aniruddha.

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 March 2020

poetic words make the poetic mind sewing the embroidered kantha sometimes inspiration encourages best poems come to us blooming buds.............

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Mj Lemon 24 March 2020

That blooming bud image- -perfection! Thank you, Mahtab.

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