Do Me A Favor Poem by Roshni D'Souza

Do Me A Favor

Rating: 5.0

Kindly do me a favor
while you're still ahead...
Spare me cliches of undying love
even after I'm dead.

Right now, I'm right here;
hardly dead at all.
More you talk, more I realize,
out of love, I might fall.

The diamonds you buy me,
I might never wear.
And if you're really interested;
the flowers, I would spare.

So do me a favor;
just love me here and now.
Don't think too much about it;
I will show you how.

Raj Arumugam 29 May 2009

Truly, Roshni, one of the best love poems I've read in recent times. Too many love poems deal with tired old ideas and cliches and your poem goes straight to the point.

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Sandra Martyres 30 May 2009

A very refreshing love poem indeed deals with the here and now instead of those standard emotional outpourings..10++++++++

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Ted M 27 June 2009

Rightly said, True love doesn't need material things. Nice

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Sameer Ahmed 07 June 2009

A very true and pure desire of need of love irrespective of the upcomings. Indeed the humankind cant predict any of the happenings in the future so the present moment must be enjoyed even in cases of true love.....10/10

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Dr.subhendu Kar 03 June 2009

just love me here and now. Don't think too much about it; I will show you how............................ soul when immortal by audacity heart yet riffles by hope of love...............quite passionate by audacity of hope, heart still needs love ingenious, beautiful way of expression,10++++, thanks for sharing

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Shashendra Amalshan 03 June 2009

A moving and touching one indeed....i felt every kept the poignant aspect through out..nice one Roshi with lots of love shan

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a rythmic love poem. shan

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