Kindly do me a favor
while you're still ahead...
Spare me cliches of undying love
even after I'm dead.
Right now, I'm right here;
hardly dead at all.
More you talk, more I realize,
out of love, I might fall.
The diamonds you buy me,
I might never wear.
And if you're really interested;
the flowers, I would spare.
So do me a favor;
just love me here and now.
Don't think too much about it;
I will show you how.
Truly, Roshni, one of the best love poems I've read in recent times. Too many love poems deal with tired old ideas and cliches and your poem goes straight to the point.
Rightly said, True love doesn't need material things. Nice
A very true and pure desire of need of love irrespective of the upcomings. Indeed the humankind cant predict any of the happenings in the future so the present moment must be enjoyed even in cases of true love.....10/10
just love me here and now. Don't think too much about it; I will show you how............................ soul when immortal by audacity heart yet riffles by hope of love...............quite passionate by audacity of hope, heart still needs love ingenious, beautiful way of expression,10++++, thanks for sharing
A moving and touching one indeed....i felt every line..you kept the poignant aspect through out..nice one Roshi with lots of love shan
a rythmic love poem. shan
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
A very refreshing love poem indeed Roshni.....it deals with the here and now instead of those standard emotional outpourings..10++++++++