Soulmate (Acrostic) Poem by Roshni D'Souza

Soulmate (Acrostic)

Rating: 5.0


Sweet surrender of finding
One's tired soul unwinding
Until life no longer matters;
Love unchains all its fetters.
Mirrored half of each other's mess,
Aspiring always for nothing less
Than to love across life's pages,
Either together or apart for ages.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 20 May 2009

a beautiful acrostic piece written.........10

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~ Jon London ~ 01 June 2009

Great piece, every line filled with depth..and all composed in the best possible taste...nice work

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a short poem withdepth...liked the style

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Shashendra Amalshan 28 May 2009

that's a great poem with...depth....nice one, though short arouses the mind's eye 10+++

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fanttastic acrostic. you gave it good meaning

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Obed Souza 20 May 2009

Lovely, dear! All we need: to find people with whom we can share our hearts...

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