Does It Open? Poem by Rekha Mandagere
Does It Open?
The door was closed
But I patiently stood
Counting every second
Moments after moments
Growing into long minutes
Never ending hours
Made the day hopeless
Praying aloud hapless
Why are the doors merciless?
Can't they have little kindness?
Saw a cloud of silent
Enchanting brightness
Inch by inch broadened
The door at last opened
Widening towards skyline
Status smiled ONLINE !
Yes dear Rekha, you described beautifully the happiness of having back the internet connection. Your poem reminded me to be grateful for it. I hope the next generations will be able to keep this priceless freedom. The chance to communicate as we do now, to create and share to learn for free is changing me into a better human being...Or so I hope...
A beautiful thought well expressed! ' 'Status smiled ONLINE! ' May the status be always so!
I love the idea expressed and the way it is written. So true, Rekha, the world has changed tremendously. Now we can see the people we talk to over the computer, even at the other side of the world. Very nice thoughts expressed in a truly poetic way
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4/18/2024 8:52:20 PM # 1.0.0.1119
lovely write..i loved it with the sense of art and humanity_SOul