Focus On Your Goal Poem by Rekha Mandagere

Focus On Your Goal

Rating: 5.0


My lovely little spirit of smiling Denmark
This is right time for making great remark
Spread Light everywhere by driving away the dark
Here is the way to win the race with highest mark!

Colourful aims spread around you like vivid choices
Of course you would select one without much noise
Realize all your dreams by listening to great voices
Deep in your heart enjoy the sentiment of rejoice


Gaining knowledge is surely for one's enlightenment
Be confident while choosing it for your heart's enjoyment
I wait patiently opening my eyes widely in astonishment
Your goal should always be focused on its accomplishment!

Friday, March 4, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: love educates
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
One should have clearcut aim and love for knowledge to achieve success in life.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Knight 08 March 2011

Our GOALS - REKHA - Should always be focussed on knowledge and enlightenment. We should always seek for TRUTH because TRUTH will make us free. Thanks for sharing - Your Friend - JOHN : o)

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Dave Dafes 08 March 2011

a life without a goal is wasted on endless pursuit... We should focus on our goals and make each day count..Beautiful poem..Thanks for sharing

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 08 March 2011

Very beautiful lines having great wisdom and depth. The poem is extremely didactic teaching moral at different levels. A contemplative and poignant write. Thanks for sharing...

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Jenny Gordon 08 March 2011

Fascinating, a beautifully expressed tribute to the process of composition, or perhaps rather the success in composing. Lovely reflection of the opportunity, as well as sweetly hinting not so subtly at the generous goal of spreading cheer, the joy in composition on the part of the poetess, discovering what issues forth. Very beautiful and delightfully depicted.

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Abhay Vignesh L 09 March 2011

Rhyme mingled with verse....Thats what I will call poetry with a purpose...full marks

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Bernard Snyder 02 January 2012

This one deserves a 10++++++. Great write! !

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Aranthabailu Ummar 16 September 2011

a good treat to young ones

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Philip Jose 25 June 2011

REALLY ENCOURAGING, I WISH I COULD WRITE SOMETHING LIKE THIS WITH MUSICAL QUALITY

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Ray Subrata Ray 22 March 2011

This poem of yours well depicts the qualities of love and manifold soothing of love.

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Unwritten Soul 20 March 2011

Touched by beautiful advices from mother to child...n child here refer to me may refer to other readers also, in a word of strength this is what we need to hold to serve a word of encouragement...''''''''FOCUS''''''''..and also ''''''''GOAL''''''''...thanks for this advice it so gently spoken in soft poetic way :) :) -Unwritten Soul

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