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Focus On Your Goal

Rating: 5.0
My lovely little spirit of smiling Denmark
This is right time for making great remark
Spread Light everywhere by driving away the dark
Here is the way to win the race with highest mark!

Colourful aims spread around you like vivid choices
Of course you would select one without much noise
Realize all your dreams by listening to great voices
Deep in your heart enjoy the sentiment of rejoice


Gaining knowledge is surely for one's enlightenment
Be confident while choosing it for your heart's enjoyment
I wait patiently opening my eyes widely in astonishment
Your goal should always be focused on its accomplishment!
Friday, March 4, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: love educates
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
One should have clearcut aim and love for knowledge to achieve success in life.
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COMMENTS
Bernard Snyder 02 January 2012
This one deserves a 10++++++. Great write! !
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Aranthabailu Ummar 16 September 2011
a good treat to young ones
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Philip Jose 25 June 2011
REALLY ENCOURAGING, I WISH I COULD WRITE SOMETHING LIKE THIS WITH MUSICAL QUALITY
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Ray Subrata Ray 22 March 2011
This poem of yours well depicts the qualities of love and manifold soothing of love.
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Unwritten Soul 20 March 2011
Touched by beautiful advices from mother to child...n child here refer to me may refer to other readers also, in a word of strength this is what we need to hold to serve a word of encouragement...''''''''FOCUS''''''''..and also ''''''''GOAL''''''''...thanks for this advice it so gently spoken in soft poetic way :) :) -Unwritten Soul
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Martin Lochner 18 March 2011
it rings true and i like the music and light contained in this piece well done and thank you for reading my work
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Deepak Calyampoondi 15 March 2011
Lines of wisdom, well expressed.fantastic imagination
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Rekha Mandagere 15 March 2011
You have a new comment about your poem: FOCUS ON YOUR GOAL -------- Sailng the journey with passion, acquiring knowledge and with love keeping the goal in sight. It is not the destination that matters but the enjoyment of journey that makes it more meaningful. Nice description of theme
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Santosh Sharma 14 March 2011
Sailng the journey with passion, acquiring knowledge and with love keeping the goal in sight. It is not the destination that matters but the enjoyment of journey that makes it more meaningful. Nice description of theme
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Cristina Teodor 09 March 2011
Rhyme is perfect, you describe so well the 'colourful aims' that each of us we have and how we realize all our dreams 'by listening to great voices'. The resolution of poem is revelating 'your goal should always be focus on its accomplisment'. A real lesson of enlightment. Well done..Cristina Teodor
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