Does Not Matter whether Mistakes are Minor Or Major. Poem by Nabakishore Dash

Does Not Matter whether Mistakes are Minor Or Major.

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The journey of life is like a boat ride
on the surface of a deep river.
We are the ferry men
to paddle the boat smoothly from
one side to the other.

We know not when and where
we land at the end of our travel.
If sense is good and we remain committed to goodness,
the channel would be crossed
without any hassle.

Any leakage in the boat,
whether small or large,
would surely sink the boat
in the middle of the course
to lose the target.
Likewise mistakes committed, neglected, not rectified intime
would be our greatest enemy
to make the passage stormy,
devastate us in the darkest.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
As humans, we are likely to commit mistakes, but they must be rectified with goodness to reach our target.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 21 December 2022

Mistake is a mistake. Nobody on this earth excepting you is cent percent perfect. A person who learns from his/her mistake is great.

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Nabakishore Dash 24 December 2022

Dear Dr. Swain, I commit 100 mistakes a day.No ridiculing request to u..

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M. Asim Nehal 15 December 2022

Poet's notes took it to a different level altogether, awesome poem. Full ****

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