Don'T Give Up Darling Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Don'T Give Up Darling

Rating: 5.0


I warm your heart
I'm the bird in your hand

I make your laughter
I eliminate your band

I'm the dust on your shoes
I'm always near

don't give up darling
Sunflower, my dear

(2008/6/12)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hela Jug 12 June 2008

dust on your shoes, nice touch..

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Ashraful Musaddeq 15 September 2008

I gave my 10. The last lines are nostalgic. A film named Sunflower of Sophia Loren came to my mind. Great job done.

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M M 13 June 2008

This is a beautifull felt-hearted poem by a warm heart. Such words for sure help not to give up! Thanks

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Kesav Easwaran 13 June 2008

song of the sunny bird to his sunflower sweet...well done, shiraz! 10

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Rani Turton 12 June 2008

Simply and prettily put to great effect. Thanks Nightingale.

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Tsira Goge 12 June 2008

It is very gentle and warm poems the Nightingale, somebody will not dare on your poetic footpath to throw sunflower, especially, they harmfully for a throat of nightingale... Best wishes, Tsira

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