Wild flowers
No care
No water
We are oppressed
We can see
Feel
The creator
Our blood is red
We are alive
Though
We are condemned to
A Silent death
(2008/1/13)
a thought provoking message-- unwanted and unborn ++++10 as always regards anjalie (yor poems are short but full of meaning)
Your writing skill is very powerful and this poem shows it at its best
A powerful poem, my friend, and written from a point of view that is, so often, ignored by so many. Thank you Richard
Though we are condemned to die, , we are alive... feelllllll the creator....... powerful lines against abortion. my ur poem be a warning for all those who mecilessly kill their own children in the womb. thank you for taking up a powerful theme.. thank you
Another good write. This is one of the things i like about you, your poems can be short but in those words you put so much emotion and significance into them.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Its a great poem. Keep writing! Take Care!