Don't Mind Me Poem by Prabir Gayen

Don't Mind Me

Rating: 5.0


Don't Mind Me

Don't mind me when I am gone,
I was not and will never be,
My being is not a great nuance
In the water of life,
I am like the song of a stray bird,
Finished and dissolved into naught,
I am a fast-fading hailstone,
Being lost within a big cypher,
Life is a complex mathematics,
I am a veritcal line,
Don't mind if a bird sing
the song of my departure,
Like the dew on a tiny grass,
I will be flying within the great
Vacation,
The space is a space enveloped by
Space of great adjournment,
Let me drop like a shadow
When the Sun is beyond Waves.


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Tuesday, September 3, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C F 03 September 2019

Great poetic expressions, very well done. A humble and self-effacing write! 10+

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Julia Luber 03 September 2019

A vertical line is very important. You have contributed much to the mathematics of the Universe00Thank you!

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Prabir Gayen 03 September 2019

Thanks my sweet friend..you are great//

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 September 2019

a rare but excellent composition praaaaaaabir g

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Prabir Gayen 04 September 2019

Thanks my dear and lovely friend......///////

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Aniruddha Pathak 08 September 2019

'Don't mind me', here is a poem of depth, well done Prabir Gayen.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 September 2019

ARE YOU AND SM WELL NO INTERACTION SINCE LONGGGGG PPPEE GEEEEEEEEEE

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 September 2019

ToMyPoemList. Thank you, Prabir!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 September 2019

Most beautifully worded with your precious breath and soul. Absolutely, dear Prabir. I like all the metaphors you used here and the prose poems you created. They all add a great dimension to the English Literature, most important, and after having read I come to the conclusion So IS Poetry, dear Prabir! YOU represent poetry as it should be! A rare poem but magnificent. A 10 Full Score. Brilliant magnificent poem. God Bless you!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 September 2019

Another poem of great depth. It touches life being ephemeral yet there is a promise of eternity. The first two great lines of this write speak of this premise. Wonderfully written.

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