Double Trouble Poem by Vijay Sai R

Double Trouble



Spouse - A pair of eyes
If one weeps
The other one too!

Wednesday, October 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoffrey Fafard 28 October 2016

So much can be said in so few words.Beautiful Vijay. I like this.Regards Geoffrey.

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Rajendran Muthiah 27 October 2016

Of the five senses, the poet has chosen the eyes to compare with the couple. The eyes alone can wonder, smile, frown, hate, lure, like....... If any of these acts cross the limits, then only they have to shed tears! . Excellent.

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Douglas Scotney 27 October 2016

they're probably working on a potion to enable you to cry in one eye only

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Debra Deveney 27 October 2016

I love the comparison of a couple to a pair of eyes. nicely done

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Bharati Nayak 26 October 2016

Spouses are like a pair of eyes.when one weeps, the other one too. Beautiful write.Wish all couples are like that! !

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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