Dislocated Heart

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Down - Poem by Dislocated Heart

Tired,
of your dumb twisted lies,
forget I was ever alive,
speak now or forever hold your peace,
I got another soul
I must release.
My breath of air is out and done.
Through with the jokes and mask phases I have done.
Walking out on you is the best thing I'ma do,
I dont know what I ever saw in you.

Your beauty captured my eye,
Your personality crushed me whole while I'm alive.
Ate me up and threw me outside,
In darkness I run, no place to hide.
Your hands pick me up and held me close,
You kissed my cheeks and ripped my clothes.
You bare me open.. You pry into my life..
I fell for those silly lies.
My heart hanging, reaching out,
With Your fist, you struck me down.
Your words stomped all over,
Your actions spoke outloud.
You dug me a grave,
Gave me an offer I couldnt shake..
and now with my heart ripped open,
screaming out loud..
You face me with a shove..
and good byes written in bloodshed eyes.


Comments about Down by Dislocated Heart

  • (5/8/2011 2:48:00 AM)


    M sad thinkin...bt glad i cud cum across such a beaty... (Report) Reply

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  • (5/8/2011 1:41:00 AM)


    Great poem. Very well described. Great imagery and style. Excellent stuff. I rate it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 7, 2011

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 8, 2011


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