******down By The Water Poem by Randy Hogan

Randy Hogan

Randy Hogan

pænˈ dʒ iː ə Mountain Range

******down By The Water

Rating: 2.9


Down by the water, I heard a holler
down by the water, I heard a call
down by the water, I heard her moan,
she said, a storm is coming!
so she takes my hand
and walks me into the waters
as she asks for Jesus to save us
and as the waters wash over us,
she said we won't thirst no more

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 20 August 2009

Comforting feel to this piece Randy - - reminds me of the words ' I am the water of life - -whoever drinks me will never be thirsty again' honest and warm verse and 10 from Fay.

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a lovely warm poem...enjoyed it

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Meggie Gultiano 02 September 2009

your words are very comforting my dear.Nice piece

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Anjali Sinha 27 August 2009

wow sooo soothing i felt that gentle touch of Jesus his hand over my head too lovely as always +++10 lots of love anjali

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Vaibhav Pandey 25 August 2009

very soothing......pleasent to read....loved it sir...10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 22 August 2009

Lyrical quality.....nice poem

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Sathyanarayana M V S 22 August 2009

Lyrical quality.....nice poem

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