Dream... Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Dream...

Rating: 5.0


I saw you there in a dream. Walking the
shores, walking the beach. You turned and
looked at me. But, you didn't speak. Our
eyes did meet. Lock and touch deep. Now
when I glance into, eyes. That compassion
I seek. When your hand reached out, and
moved me. When together, we walked off
into the breeze.

Sunday, April 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,relationships
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 02 May 2018

Ah..... dreams..... and than when we meet our dreams face to face.... you really captured the dreamlike quality to this. Well-done. Now go romp on that beach! ! ! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 03 May 2018

With More Than A Yip And A Whine Definitely Some Dreams Can Be Unkind! ! ! ! ! .... You Do Bring Me Giggles Though... Susan, Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! ..... Try To Keep Smiling! ! ! ! Too... Your Poetry Ever So Beautifully Speaks With Such Heart Loving Kindness And A True Beauty Deep! ! ! ! ! ..... Keep Smiling! ! ! ! ! .... Look To God! ! ! ! ! .... Pray! ! ! ! ! ... God Bless! ! ! ! ! ... :) Thank You Again, Love, Your Friend

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 April 2018

Walking in shores of life and dream you have seen that togetherness of wind and breeze. Amazing relationship is beautifully presented here...10

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Rebecca Navarre 01 May 2018

Thank You! ! ! Kumarmani, For Your Beautifully Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is Painted With Ever Such Depth And Beauty, Such Light And Feeling, That's Ever So Moving! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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