Friday, February 2, 2007

'Dream Catcher' Comments

Rating: 4.3

Dream catcher a little device
Dream catcher I see your surprise
Dream catcher wake me up
Dream catcher don't be rough
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Kimberley Waldron
COMMENTS
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 16 November 2014

Great imagery and very creative......simple yet powerful write.....amazing piece

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 16 November 2014

Dream catcher can't you see I'm in your world Come and catch me. 'cause I am dream creator

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 16 November 2014

Rhyme in the poem it is superb. The dream catcher a nice imagination.likes it.

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Liliana ~el 16 November 2013

Really lost in this dream world Whimsy

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Leslie Philibert 16 November 2013

Good write, the rhyme scheme suprises me, notice a couplet in the middle with hand and sand, apart from that free verse, then see and me in the last lines

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 16 November 2013

I'm in your world Come and catch me. lovly butterfly like poem

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Pranab K Chakraborty 16 November 2012

Just nice as a child make.

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Abaka Blessing Anastasia 16 November 2012

dream catcher come and catch me. cool poem

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Anna jonson 25 August 2008

good poem.. like it..........

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Brianna Royster 04 June 2008

your poetry was amazing wow wonderful i would love to read more

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Zoe Abel 12 July 2007

dreamy.................

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Jibin Joseph 15 February 2007

send me back to sleep intersting wishes jibin

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