Dream Holiday Places Poem by s.zaynab kamoonpury

Dream Holiday Places

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Oh yes, oh yes salams, hello, hi
Aha, oh my, oh my, oh my
My favorite dream places happen to be
ones that rhyme with the words
aye, aye, aye and bye, bye, bye
for I wish to fly
to divine Dubai
to showy Shanghai
to Beautiful Brunei
and heavenly Hawaii
and last but not least
the land of the Thai

The only odd ones out in this rhyme scheme
of exotic favourite places of my dream
aretouristy Turkey and Singapore
ah I wrote this kinda' extempore.
So if I do go gallivanting
somewhat like Gulliver on his travels
these would be the places I'd like to explore.

Ah it's always great to travel
and geo atlas mysteries unravel
upon God's wide world to marvel

Going places to collect and bring back memories
A collection of curios and cherished souvenirs

As indeed whenever you bring back some exotica
you enhance your knowledge with those ephemera.

So guys I'd love to fly
to travel to Turkey and Thailand
Sojourn in Shanghai
depart for Dubai
holiday in hawaii
Board a flight to Brunei.
One has to try
to get into jetsetting style
act somewhat like the jet set
for frequent flyer mile.

This has been a poetic travelogue
for any voyage in vogue.

But whenever I can and if I have luck now
I know I could never tire of journeying
to Aligarh and Lucknow
For motherland India calls me like no other
a place to hug my origins, beloved dad and mother.

Ah, only if there were no travel formalities
I could be sightseeing many more cities.
Without need of passports, ticket and visa
anyone could've travelled
to watch the Leaning tower of Pisa
or even the egyptian pyramids of Giza.

But for spiritual enlightenment and nourishment the mecca of thronging visitors
I wish to frequently visit Mecca as a pilgrim, Hajj is of the Islamic pillars

So O' Tinkerbell, sprinkle me too with yer fairy pixie dust
so I too can fly, and satisfy, my spasmodic wanderlust

Dream Holiday Places
Mahtab Bangalee 13 December 2018

beautiful poem on country and traveling- /// (GOD's Saying) O human being come and worship me after worshiping spread over the world observe all how beautifully I (GOD) created and be grateful to me those who are grateful to me I'm (GOD) also gives him/her my blessings .....//// so, wander, travel country to country and observe all and be grateful to GOD

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 December 2018

You are so right, thanks for your great enlightening comment in support of travelling Go's beautiful world.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 December 2018

Sorry typo in a rush, I mean God's world.

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Jennifer Birchall 10 May 2019

This makes me want to get my passport renewed asap, a wonderful poem dear s.zaynab.

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Saniya Galeyeva 07 January 2019

Seeing the beauty of the world and having a place to come back are the most important things in our life. Thanks for sharing this nice poem.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 28 December 2018

May Allah bless your desires.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 December 2018

this is very RACY STYLE all the while good poetry unique style u have not again come by

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 19 December 2018

Aw yes, I will come by now then. Thanks for comment m yes it's a racy poem.

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Mihaela Pirjol 17 December 2018

A wonderful poem filled with exuberant joy, and the repetition makes a perfect rhymed refrain! Absolutely beautiful!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 17 December 2018

Warmest thanks for lovely feedback, am so glad the refrain is good and u liked it.

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