Mother Nature's Moodswings Poem by s.zaynab kamoonpury

Mother Nature's Moodswings

Rating: 4.2

Nature smiles in Spring
Pulls at our heart string
as greenery's hued in greener tinge
Having had an everlasting effect
on those evergreen trees.

Nature frowns in Autumn
Browns crisply but in coral hues
even if it feels blue in the fall
Almost seems to sigh drily, wistfully
Denuded trees look dull and drab
Cerise but fallen
in the windy breeze.

And this very mother nature
in full-blown winter
gives all the cold shoulder
Reveals her cold-hearted side
Could'st turn into a cold-blooded murderer
Even her nature lovers get cold feet
In the draught of winter
A time for a A-tishoo in your tissue
a time for the noisy sneeze
Oh! Beware her icy glare, in the cold war
as she coerces all to freeze!

Ah in summer, nature boils and goes into a 'heated debate'
What with the burning sun and its scorching torment
Ah she can be hot-tempered this mother nature
But let the sweltered ones bathe in the seven seas
and opt for sundaes instead of steaming teas.

And if you really wish to see
mother nature fuming in fury
Behold it in thunderstorm and hurricane
You crouched safely behind the window pane
For she might storm at you quite violently
Watch out! She could get real stormy
Better stay out of her way at such times please!

And hee hee I do hope yah like
my seasoned seasonal pun
It's fine here to have
some fair weather fun
And take mom Nature's pic as she says cheese!

Yet the point here, she's created as are all mothers
implying God, not she herself could have made all of these
And so like all God's creatures who have free will
is sometimes fallible and free to do as she please.

Mother Nature's Moodswings
Kelly Kurt 02 April 2015

A wonderful, vibrant poem. Thank you for sharing.

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Valsa George 24 March 2015

This is an amazing write Zaynub! All the four seasons are captured beautifully without being tedious! Nature's comparison to a mother's mood swings is quite apt! Enjoyed your 'seasoned seasonal pun' and had much fun! Top marks! I invite you to read my poem on latest post! If possible, my other poems... Spring, Summer and Autumn!

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Lyn Paul 23 March 2015

Such a beautiful description of Mother nature and I loved your light humour. Have a sun shiny day.

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Kelly Kurt 22 March 2015

An enjoyable read. Thank you.

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Bharati Nayak 31 March 2015

Nature's moods captured perfectly in this wonderful poem.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 15 December 2021

Amazing nature poem! Thank you!

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Chinedu Dike 04 March 2020

Very insightful and compelling reflection on Nature, a work of an intricate mind.

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Rebecca Navarre 18 September 2018

Ever so beautifully woven, as we feel with such heart the words spoken! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Bill Cantrell 09 September 2017

Well, I'm glad you use your free will to write such beautiful poetry! Oh! Beware her icy out! She could get real stormy.....I really love the way these types of lines shout out suddenly at the reader, your poetry is indeed refreshing and charming! ! !

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Chan Mongol 29 October 2016

This is my kind of poem. The poet has a skilled brain to well construct her poem. For me, it is not a poem if I don't find rhythm and rhymes in a poem. I will rate the poem to #10. The poet put her heart to describe the nature. By the way, I will request the poet to read my (1) Autumn and winter + (2) Love to life. _____Thanks for sharing.

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