s.zaynab kamoonpuri

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Mother Nature's Moodswings - Poem by s.zaynab kamoonpuri

Nature smiles in Spring
Pulls at our heart string
as greenery's hued in greener tinge
Having had an everlasting effect
on those evergreen trees.

Nature frowns in Autumn
Browns crisply but in coral hues
even if it feels blue in the fall
Almost seems to sigh drily, wistfully
Denuded trees look dull and drab
Cerise but fallen
in the windy breeze.

And this very mother nature
in full-blown winter
gives all the cold shoulder
Reveals her cold-hearted side
Could'st turn into a cold-blooded murderer
Even her nature lovers get cold feet
In the draught of winter
A time for a A-tishoo in your tissue
a time for the noisy sneeze
Oh! Beware her icy glare, in the cold war
as she coerces all to freeze!

Ah in summer, nature boils and goes into a 'heated debate'
What with the burning sun and its scorching torment
Ah she can be hot-tempered this mother nature
But let the sweltered ones bathe in the seven seas
and opt for sundaes instead of steaming teas.


And if you really wish to see
mother nature fuming in fury
Behold it in thunderstorm and hurricane
You crouched safely behind the window pane
For she might storm at you quite violently
Watch out! She could get real stormy
Better stay out of her way at such times please!

And hee hee I do hope yah like
my seasoned seasonal pun
It's fine here to have
some fair weather fun
And take mom Nature's pic as she says cheese!

Yet the point here, she's created as are all mothers
implying God, not she herself could have made all of these
And so like all God's creatures who have free will
is sometimes fallible and free to do as she please.

Topic(s) of this poem: art


Comments about Mother Nature's Moodswings by s.zaynab kamoonpuri

  • Bill Cantrell (9/9/2017 8:26:00 PM)


    Well, I'm glad you use your free will to write such beautiful poetry! Oh! Beware her icy glare.....watch out! She could get real stormy.....I really love the way these types of lines shout out suddenly at the reader, your poetry is indeed refreshing and charming! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Chan Mongol (10/29/2016 2:56:00 PM)


    This is my kind of poem. The poet has a skilled brain to well construct her poem. For me, it is not a poem if I don't find rhythm and rhymes in a poem. I will rate the poem to #10. The poet put her heart to describe the nature. By the way, I will request the poet to read my (1) Autumn and winter + (2) Love to life. _____Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (3/2/2016 9:45:00 PM)


    You have succinctly portrayed various moods of nature in a remarkable style spiced with idioms to cheer up the mood of the reader. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Marilyn Lott (8/4/2015 9:58:00 AM)


    I love Mother Nature and all of her seasons. Thank you so much for your view of them with wonderful colors and textures. All of the senses come alive. (Report) Reply

  • Jitesh Shah (4/13/2015 9:49:00 PM)


    a wonderful, very nice i like it and also read my poem (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur (4/7/2015 8:55:00 PM)


    Prudent writing where you detailed the different facets of mother nature and you painted it so nicely.I loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • (4/7/2015 9:24:00 AM)


    really good poem! ! All the four seasons are captured beautifully without being tedious! Nature's comparison to a mother's mood swings (Report) Reply

  • Paul Sebastian (4/7/2015 6:22:00 AM)


    Clever poetic painting of words! Great perception of the four seasons, personifying mother nature. Your rhyming verses and word-skill is greatly admired. I enjoyed your poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • (4/6/2015 10:06:00 PM)


    Great wordplay hear, quite a rip roaring adventure into the many faces of mother nature, its very lush and gallivant, you do an amazing job of playing with words using metaphors I especially like this part

    in summer, nature boils and goes into a 'heated debate'

    Cracking stuff, I love when someone is able to write a distinctive work about the seasons, and this is distinctive, well done!
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (4/6/2015 6:29:00 PM)


    Nature flows in Autumn and yet the point here Nature mother nurtures all with love and care. Wonderful poem shared really. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (4/2/2015 3:19:00 PM)


    A wonderful, vibrant poem. Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (3/31/2015 12:04:00 PM)


    Nature's moods captured perfectly in this wonderful poem. (Report) Reply

  • (3/28/2015 4:49:00 PM)


    A colourful pallet of poetry (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (3/24/2015 1:02:00 AM)


    This is an amazing write Zaynub! All the four seasons are captured beautifully without being tedious! Nature's comparison to a mother's mood swings is quite apt! Enjoyed your 'seasoned seasonal pun' and had much fun! Top marks! I invite you to read my poem on Winter...my latest post! If possible, my other poems... Spring, Summer and Autumn! (Report) Reply

  • Stephen Katona (3/23/2015 7:22:00 PM)


    A lovely description of the many faces of mother nature. (Report) Reply

  • (3/23/2015 6:08:00 PM)


    Mother nature is one of the things that we can all enjoy, a great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (3/23/2015 5:01:00 PM)


    Such a beautiful description of Mother nature and I loved your light humour. Have a sun shiny day. (Report) Reply

  • (3/23/2015 3:08:00 PM)


    A very nice reading. Props to you for writing this. (Report) Reply

  • Abdulla Al-hemaidy (3/23/2015 12:14:00 PM)


    Wonderful reading! Agreed with you. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (3/22/2015 1:43:00 PM)


    An enjoyable read. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 22, 2015

Poem Edited: Sunday, March 22, 2015


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