I hope their are guitars in Heaven,
a flute or two would be ok,
this is my dream of Heaven,
Like Burger King,
I get to have it my way,
Nobody gets angry in Heaven,
time out's put one on the moon,
disputer's can argue with craters or,
make sand-castles in moon-dunes,
I hope we can fly on a wing and a prayer,
and do all our favorite things,
there's love floatin all over up there,
its never a bad time to sing,
I want to see who made the sun,
I wish to join peace, love and joy,
and give to the Lord all the songs in my heart,
and sail on blue waters, ahoy!
There are no politicians in Heaven,
if we want we can all have a goat,
or a castle that's high with rooms in the sky,
on the ground there are fish in the moat,
somedays we will have big parades,
to honor the Savior and King,
life will be kind, no one crippled or blind,
smiles shine, laughter will ring,
I want to live in a hut,
made of straw, on a tropical isle,
love what everyday brings,
we can play we can sing,
where even the lemons have smiles
rilly luvly poem elizabeth i like ur choice of words and all. Really nice stuff keep it up
Loved your poem, but there are some spelling errors which can be edited by you anytime, like: 'p' is missing from the word 'Glimpses' in the title of the poem (hinted by Herbert Logerie Sr in his comment) . 'g' is missing from the word 'floating' in the 12th line.
'There are no politicians in Heaven' - Ah! That's a great relief to know! Politicians are pains everywhere! 'Nobody gets angry in Heaven.... there's love floating all over up there'... what a heavenly thought! I would love to be there just for that!
This is an extremely well-crafted piece. Keep writing...10/10.
Goats in heaven. You're kidding. Nice poem. I wish I could believe.
lol sure why not? Goats are fun :) Thank you for reading my poem :)
Did you mean glimpses of Heaven? I stay away from fast food restaurants, however I like your poem.
This is just one person's dream of what Heaven could be like, and would be for her. Thank you Herbert for reading my poem :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like this dreams can be glimpes of heaven
Thank you Gerry :)