Dreams Do Harm Poem by Kimberley Kerry

Dreams Do Harm

Rating: 4.9


Dreams of a dreamer,
laid out beside her,
Dreams of a waster,
come back to snide her.

Fears of a preacher,
he trys, well to guide her,
Fears of a father.
do but, misguide her.

Sins of a sinner,
laid out beside her,
Scares from the scarer,
laid out upon her.

And with this knife,
this pretty little knife,
She'll end this,
Her all but pretty little life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Justice For All 14 March 2009

it, s realy good poem i don't know what i should say... just keep writing........10

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Sid John Gardner. 14 March 2009

Life needs to grow and prosper....'Spock'.... Forget the dreams...Get your education sorted then.....Flourish... Nice meaningful poem...Didnt like the penknife bit though...Take care. Sid.

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Miriam Maia Padua 14 March 2009

very meaningful, written with depth... intriguing...interesting... keep on writing...you write so well....really

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Muhammad Ali 14 March 2009

nice poem friend, carry on, hope you a healthy future

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Catrina Heart 14 March 2009

pretty nice end rhymes...poignant craft...Thanks 10

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kaitie cicero 06 June 2009

great. i love this one

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keep dreaming my friend..never fear it..an inquisitive and eye opening write..u amazing!

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Honest Heart 14 March 2009

very saaaaaaad...but very nice poem...keeeeeeeeeeep writing :)

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 14 March 2009

At first glance seems like a horror or psycho movie but in depth very meaningful and sad. Keep on writing.......10. Best Wishes Naseer

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Gordon Wilkinson 14 March 2009

Very deep and sad, straight from the heart where poetry is born - 10+

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