Drip Drip Poem by M.J. Lemon

Drip Drip

Rating: 5.0


in seeking to be
the Johannes Vermeer
or even Salvador Dali
of words

I succeeded
only

in invoking
and inviting
the ire of
one Jackson Pollock

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 06 October 2023

A very colorful painting of your expressionistic poetic mind. It sheds LIGHT on your genius, M.J.!

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M.J. Lemon 01 December 2023

Richard my friend, thank you so much.

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Kevin Patrick 20 June 2023

Lol. Nothing wrong with that! . Pollock was a genuise in abstract expressionism. Maybe your Salvador Pollock

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M.J. Lemon 24 June 2023

I'll take it! Thank you, Kevin.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 June 2023

I'm trying to be Warhol

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M.J. Lemon 19 June 2023

Just keep thinking soup, Marilyn and Mao! You'll get there, LeeAnn!

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Sando Hussam 16 June 2023

Nicely written poem. I enjoyed.

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M.J. Lemon 19 June 2023

Thank you so much, Sando!

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M. Asim Nehal 16 June 2023

Very interesting poem, we all try to please others but ends up making someone angry in the process, as well. Good poem 5*****

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M.J. Lemon 19 June 2023

Thank you so much, Asim. And indeed, either angry or frustrated, or maybe both.

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