Dripping Crimson Poem by Theorem The Truth Serum

Dripping Crimson

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I wrote you a letter
and I wanted it to be
in your hands today
but you left swiftly
after you punched in
your departing numbers
You didn't give me a chance
I wanted to give you
an ink filled parchment
that would put me on
the road toward the vault
that holds your very heart
I want to put on a mask
and creep into it
and pull it out
I'll run away with it
in a bag that is
dripping crimson
I might set off all the alarms
but I don't care I want you to know

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Uriah Hamilton 05 December 2005

Just like Mary I enjoyed the visual.

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Mary Nagy 03 December 2005

Wow, this is such an unusual poem about a very common topic. Great visual with the bag dripping as you run away..........what an interesting take on ''stealing'' somebody's heart! Great poem. Sincerely, Mary

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