Dulcet Dawn Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Dulcet Dawn

Rating: 4.8


green betides by days and nights
chilled snow melts away
by touch of rays golden
as warmth holds on by embrace

night awaits to tune by melody of darkness
as musky muse defers to darkness
leaf sways by redemption of brightness
waxing moon looks to blue of ocean

waves ravishing redounds to blue
where is reeks of frigidity by snow
luscious flow wakes heart to glow
dulcet dawn never yet frightened

stance when numb with fear to move
sweet whispers reasons to blaze
glory of love refluxes by dream
earth seems sates up by fill of sun

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 15 August 2009

very captivating...words enough to amaze us... as always really describes a beautiful and so meaningful picturing your words very vividly...very impressive DULCET DAWN...a very captivating title.. describing a dawn with a picture so pleasant and soothing.. very refreshing...from darkness to dulcet dawn...inspiring as always, I love this... 10+++ Maia lovelots,

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Shashendra Amalshan 15 August 2009

Hey beautiful expressions indeed.. you capture the reader's heart by first line and keep him entranced till the very end.. great refreshment indeed.. nice 10++ lovess shan

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Swatimalya Chattopadhyay 15 August 2009

The juncture of disapperance of night and visibility of sun is beautifully described. The poem rejoices the heart of a reader because the frigidity of snow has gone away, darkness fades and the ocean has regained its momentum.Subhendu, where do you get so many good words from-appropriate for the occasion? Excellent write.

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Carol Gall 14 August 2009

an excellent write chilled snow melts 10

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Celina Zavala 11 August 2009

wow this is really nice=] n im hopein to read more from u cuz this is some good stuff u got goin on here n all ur other ones i read..lol i read like almost 20 of them i was so into ur poems -celina

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Mimi Brown 23 August 2009

Nice flowing rhythm. Good descriptions, but I had trouble following the last two stanzas, they did not seem as well constructed as the first two verses.

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Matthew C. L. Pratt 23 August 2009

It's a very diverse descriptive poem

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Dragon Wizard 22 August 2009

I must recognize the beauty of your metaphores, enmeshed within a word for the soul and a word for the pilgrim. True beauty lies beyond all physical boundaries of men, but within the essence of Mother Nature. Truly beautiful indeed!

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Mystic C 22 August 2009

As you wished i checked out your poem x) .... it's really so beautiful really captures the dawn in words i will certainly add this to my favorites

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Omar Ibrahim 19 August 2009

why don't you invite me to read your new poems you know i like your poems please tell me when you write a new poem.....wonderful as usual....10

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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