Dulcet Dawn Poem by Dr subhendu kar
Dulcet Dawn
green betides by days and nights
chilled snow melts away
by touch of rays golden
as warmth holds on by embrace
night awaits to tune by melody of darkness
as musky muse defers to darkness
leaf sways by redemption of brightness
waxing moon looks to blue of ocean
waves ravishing redounds to blue
where is reeks of frigidity by snow
luscious flow wakes heart to glow
dulcet dawn never yet frightened
stance when numb with fear to move
sweet whispers reasons to blaze
glory of love refluxes by dream
earth seems sates up by fill of sun
To describe your own 'dulcet dawn' dear friend is so enlightening for those of us who live afar - - and thank you for the gentle warm words which certainly deserve a full 10 - - - greetings from Fay.
This is very interesting and very good poem. I like it.(10v) . Thank you.Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt
Nice flowing rhythm. Good descriptions, but I had trouble following the last two stanzas, they did not seem as well constructed as the first two verses.
I must recognize the beauty of your metaphores, enmeshed within a word for the soul and a word for the pilgrim. True beauty lies beyond all physical boundaries of men, but within the essence of Mother Nature. Truly beautiful indeed!
As you wished i checked out your poem x) .... it's really so beautiful really captures the dawn in words i will certainly add this to my favorites
why don't you invite me to read your new poems you know i like your poems please tell me when you write a new poem.....wonderful as usual....10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Stupendous poetry! ! ! well worded and formed...I am in awe in your crafts...10+++