Dusts Breath* Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Dusts Breath*



Unkept all motes are light
unto themselves.
Merrily dancing with the
beam of breath.

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Bri Edwards 23 September 2017

i guess i won't need a drawbridge to cross this 'mote': mote mōt/ noun plural noun: motes a tiny piece of a substance. the tiniest mote of dust synonyms: speck, particle, grain, spot, fleck, atom, scintilla do you know how it feels to have not even a mote of hope? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i like it, especially these lines: Merrily dancing with the beam of breath.............................i'm a sucker for alliterations. bri :) :)

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