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Dying I Enter My Home

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On the white sands of the shore
There a came a wave
It came up to my feet,
touched my feet
and washed it.

Receding,
it gave me
the bubbles and white foam
dying instantly
as it joined the mighty sea.
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Dying I Enter My Home
Friday, April 30, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: mystical
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COMMENTS
Lillian Thomas 16 August 2018
great imagery and wonderful imagination. I like the way you let us find our own meaning. Just the observation alone sparks a new way to see the shore.
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Sranisha Francis 18 September 2015
The sea is my home. By dying to the shore I enter my home. Hi, Tony, You are a free person.
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Bri Edwards 06 February 2014
i have some problems with this poem, but unless you ask, i may just not bother to mention them to you in detail. thanks for sharing. :) bri
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Unwritten Soul 06 August 2010
This one is so different but the value is priceless...so good! You missing somewhere u belong to, staying at middle of road, between ur 'place' and your present 'place' always make u in between...but dont u miss the ocean? How could u think to leave shore...In between, and so still u stay in both...and what i understand (another version) , for me, i refer this as a life, we now live as human and yet going older (and death) and reach to new home, which where we belong (life after death) ...earth and heaven? A lot of things can be translated by many ways from this philosophical poem! :) :)
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Mariette Singer 27 June 2010
dying i enter my home.its very nice phiolosophy thank you.
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Chaitanya Dorwat 20 June 2010
I believe that there is an ocean of thoughts behind these few words that express each of your emotion perfectly.Honestly I had to gaze this work for minutes for understanding the actual thought...it is ur homesickness that I sensed......you were given opportunities and you ventured out of your home but then giving a gratitude which existed not for so much time like bursting bubbles you returned to ur own home.... flawlessly mindblowing.. I guess u r missing India very much.
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Sandhya S N 15 June 2010
very nice poem beatiful imagery in very simple words congrats regards sandhya
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Monique Reyes 27 May 2010
its a kool poem and well very nice but i dont see life that way
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Sreekala Sukumaran 18 May 2010
Great imagination... well linked with soul... too good enjoyed reading it...
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Pratyush Mishra 14 May 2010
unless u die u can't be born...just like one must become empty to absorb the emotions this moment is offering us... Keep at good sir!
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