Dr. Antony Theodore


Dying I Enter My Home - Poem by Dr. Antony Theodore

On the white sands of the shore
There a came a wave
It came up to my feet,
touched my feet
and washed it.

Receding,
it gave me
the bubbles and white foam
dying instantly
as it joined the mighty sea.

The sea is my home.
By dying to the shore
I enter my home.

Topic(s) of this poem: mystical


Comments about Dying I Enter My Home by Dr. Antony Theodore

  • Sranisha Francis (9/18/2015 4:29:00 PM)


    The sea is my home.
    By dying to the shore
    I enter my home. Hi, Tony, You are a free person.
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  • Bri Edwards (2/6/2014 9:59:00 PM)


    i have some problems with this poem, but unless you ask, i may just not bother to mention them to you in detail. thanks for sharing. :) bri (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (8/6/2010 11:30:00 AM)


    This one is so different but the value is priceless...so good! You missing somewhere u belong to, staying at middle of road, between ur 'place' and your present 'place' always make u in between...but dont u miss the ocean? How could u think to leave shore...In between, and so still u stay in both...and what i understand (another version) , for me, i refer this as a life, we now live as human and yet going older (and death) and reach to new home, which where we belong (life after death) ...earth and heaven? A lot of things can be translated by many ways from this philosophical poem! :) :) (Report) Reply

  • (6/27/2010 8:01:00 AM)


    dying i enter my home.its very nice phiolosophy
    thank you.
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  • (6/20/2010 11:34:00 PM)


    I believe that there is an ocean of thoughts behind these few words that express each of your emotion perfectly.Honestly I had to gaze this work for minutes for understanding the actual thought...it is ur homesickness that I sensed......you were given opportunities and you ventured out of your home but then giving a gratitude which existed not for so much time like bursting bubbles you returned to ur own home....
    flawlessly mindblowing..
    I guess u r missing India very much.
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  • (6/15/2010 12:58:00 AM)


    very nice poem
    beatiful imagery in very simple words
    congrats
    regards
    sandhya
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  • (5/27/2010 12:32:00 PM)


    its a kool poem and well very nice but i dont see life that way (Report) Reply

  • (5/18/2010 2:36:00 AM)


    Great imagination... well linked with soul... too good enjoyed reading it... (Report) Reply

  • (5/14/2010 9:52:00 AM)


    unless u die u can't be born...just like one must become empty to absorb the emotions this moment is offering us... Keep at good sir! (Report) Reply

  • (5/13/2010 10:51:00 AM)


    this piece is very philosophical.. and deep write.. thanks for letting yr readers ponder on the depth of it.. (Report) Reply

  • (5/11/2010 2:36:00 AM)


    Its speechless..... so wel writen, so beautiful....... Great imagination. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (5/8/2010 1:51:00 PM)


    The sea is my home.
    By dying to the shore
    I enter my home........................in dynamics of nature everything goes by rise and fall by crest and trough in its time and space as specified by its own reason, wonderful write imagery and metaphors, quite metaphysical,10+++.thanks for sharing
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  • Shirin Sheikhi (5/8/2010 2:15:00 AM)


    +10
    thank you for writing such nice piece
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  • (5/4/2010 1:41:00 AM)


    Are you refering to the resurrection idea of christianity where Christ dies on the cross and is resurrected.
    dying to the shore i am reborn in the sea for sea is my home... thank you for the ideas. you are very much poetic in your little poems
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  • Sandra Martyres (5/2/2010 1:24:00 AM)


    Nice link to human existence (Report) Reply

  • (4/30/2010 4:06:00 PM)


    Every instant is a death, rebirth and renewal. The human consiousness and the body are wonderful elements, when linked to the soul. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 30, 2010

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 25, 2015


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