Early Spring/Cornfield Mice (2 Haiku) Poem by Ben Gieske

Early Spring/Cornfield Mice (2 Haiku)

Rating: 3.1


crocus maiden-white
wisp of snow's kiss
early spring

cornfield mice
dancing with the moon
fox-trot

Submitted to February 2008 Kukai, Haiku World

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Howard Johnson 13 March 2008

I love the marrage between them (Simile) , very creative, Ben

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Aine Ní Leidhin 12 March 2008

to happen in order to illuminate possibilities that achieve balance. Lovely vision. Kind regards Aine

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