Eden Poem by Christian Thomas Scott

Eden



By nightfall did we reach,
And so begin our destination.
As though I would, at least, assume it was a stable course.
Though unsteady was the travel.
You caught me at a time,
And truth be told, there is no other way.

It was quite unlike most present happenings.

Yet something stirring where we will,
And if we may, lay down our heads to rest.
But we are not so fluid in the daytime.
And after several thousand years or so,
Of sitting on blank magazines and
Pamphlet rendered thoughts,
Those structures say:
Come back to earth, come back to feel again!

I do not think I will return.

But look! Those lucky forests sleep away,
Until they wake no more.
But that's a story for when we wake,
Or when we're fast and dead asleep.

And to pull it off without a hitch,
You might have difficult encounters.

Oh but sometimes I wish, and far too often I hope.
Yet they only travel hand in hand.
I wish I'd never held them in my own.

So despite my wavering,
I fell asleep in the midst of my dreams,
And when I woke, I slumbered on.
If only one could have such faith as strong as doubt.
I daresay immovable then.

But uncertainty keeps me, and I'm sure of nothing,
Yet tethered, as one might say, grounded.
Some flickering remnant, to be tasted.
Though you caught me at a time,
There is no other,
No other way.

I'm truly sorry, I truly am,
I did not know how much life was left.
I would've, I could've squeezed the droplets, could've
forced and shook the marrow from the bone.
He could've wrung them dry if he had known..
Sucking the last bit of soul to his lips.

Buck up, they said.
At least you have tomorrow.
At least you have today.

I do not think I will return.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 26 May 2018

i like it and i don't like it, but for the most part this was a smooth and 'interesting' write. i had some trouble with interpretation, and i don't like it when i have such 'trouble'! ;) let me look at another of yours. maybe Kingfisher. welcome to PH. bri ;)

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In retrospect, I have found there is too much weight in this poem. The words are not strong enough to hold what they contain.

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Try One Night in June

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Naila Rais 11 May 2018

A well expressed poem.. I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too.... Naila

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Bernard F. Asuncion 11 May 2018

Dear Christian, such a well expressed poem👍👍👍

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Gajanan Mishra 10 May 2018

The journey of life is unreturnable

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