Ego Poem by Vanessa Hughes
Ego
I need to lose my ego
It carries me away
To places I don't want to be
And stresses out my day
I need to lose my ego
It forges way ahead
Evoking anger, stirring hurt
My ego's easily lead
I need to halt my ego
It feeds on grief and pain
Only when it's truly starved
Will I feel at ease again
ego- super ego - every body embraced it - Nothing in this world is ours- try to believe it
Beautifully written.An insightful look at the damages one's ego does.Thanks for sharing☺
Perfect diction and rhythm, great poem concerning our egos! They tend to get in the way, trying to outdo others and wrecking havoc in our lives. Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn
ego is the force that compels men to wickedness. Nicely penned, Vanessa
Simply great. We must learn to be a little more humble. Lovely rhyme and flow. Well done.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 3:13:51 PM # 1.0.0.1119
amazing poem...impressive it is so well rhymed...simple and it has a mega message. not many poems i read today have one component right. but, as a non native english speaker i shy at talking too much.. lest i reflect my own ignorance blessings very nice liked