Emancipation Day Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Emancipation Day

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Still it's not a day so bright,
still it's not a day of sunlight,
still it's not a pleasant moonlight,
may be a day or starry night,
I am still a slave,
of old forecasts,
that make so many promises to me,
and I am sure that promise that is made to me,
is the real one
while others are dreaming like an ignorant Niger
whose emancipation
is in the hands of the Angel of Death,
still I am fighting with my fate,
I am blind in love and belief.
All my efforts are to prove that
my dreams will come true.
Who can fight with his fate?
We all are like the innocent Niger
And I see the Angel of Death,
Is approaching all of us,
and when our sleep will be broken
and if a little hatred is left in us,
we shall not hate anything else
other than the old forecasts
that kidded us to dream like the ignorant Niger!

Saturday, June 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: slavery
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The Slave's Dream (By H.W. Longfellow)
Beside the ungathered rice he lay,
His sickle in his hand;
His breast was bare, his matted hair
Was buried in the sand.
Again, in the mist and shadow of sleep,
He saw his Native Land.
Wide through the landscape of his dreams
The lordly Niger flowed;
Beneath the palm-trees on the plain
Once more a king he strode;
And heard the tinkling caravans
Descend the mountain-road.
He saw once more his dark-eyed queen
Among her children stand;
They clasped his neck, they kissed his cheeks,
They held him by the hand! -
A tear burst from the sleeper's lids
And fell into the sand.
And then at furious speed he rode
Along the Niger's bank;
His bridle-reins were golden chains,
And, with a martial clank,
At each leap he could feel his scabbard of steel
Smiting his stallion's flank.
Before him, like a blood-red flag,
The bright flamingoes flew;
From morn till night he followed their flight,
O'er plains where the tamarind grew,
Till he saw the roofs of Caffre huts,
And the ocean rose to view.
At night he heard the lion roar,
And the hyena scream,
And the river-horse, as he crushed the reeds
Beside some hidden stream;
And it passed, like a glorious roll of drums,
Through the triumph of his dream.
The forests, with their myriad tongues,
Shouted of liberty;
And the Blast of the Desert cried aloud,
With a voice so wild and free,
That he started in his sleep and smiled
At their tempestuous glee.
He did not feel the driver's whip,
Nor the burning heat of day;
For Death had illumined the Land of Sleep,
And his lifeless body lay
A worn-out fetter, that the soul
Had broken and thrown away!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalida Bano Ali 18 December 2017

A wonderful poem based on on a great poem of H.W. Longfellow.

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Loke Kok Yee 21 June 2016

fight on my friend and soon we will all see the light Thank you sir-10

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Bisma Mirza 19 June 2016

A thoughtful poem, liked it...........................

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