Elimination Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Elimination

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I was annoyed of rats and reptiles,
So what if a kitten is dead on the tiles,
I don't kill anyone, I just eliminate,
The kitten was only a victim of his fate,
Why he chased the foolish ugly rat?
I'm a lover of beauty, see my hat!
It's a symbol of power and the might,
Don't you know it's might that's right?
No mosquitoes and the cockroaches,
Can't tolerate if dirt approaches,
My house should remain neat and clean,
I'm above the law as I am a dean,
To keep my kitchen hygienic and neat,
For the rats, scattered poisonous meat,
Trespassed the door, my unlucky kitten,
Sorry to see dead in neat clean kitchen.


(In February 1989, two years before the fall of the Soviet Union, a research paper by Georgian historian Roy Aleksandrovich Medvedev published in the weekly tabloid Argumenti i Fakti estimated that the death toll directly attributable to Stalin's rule amounted to some 20 million lives ……With thanks to International Business Times)

Elimination
Sunday, May 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: human being
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pamela Sinicrope 10 May 2016

I don't kill anyone...I just eliminate. That's a chilling line all alone with nothing else around it. I was first puzzled by this writing until I read your author's note. I see what you are portraying. I also was amazed by the line about beauty and the hat. Scary stuff. Such disregard for life.

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Loke Kok Yee 10 May 2016

A timely reminder in this uncertain times Thank you sir! -10

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 May 2016

My house should remain neat and clean; but, not for war! ! Nice piece of work.

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Kelly Kurt 09 May 2016

A powerful and poignant poem. This speaks of the mindset of such megalomaniacs. The world is aware of many such genocidal events (I just posted one about the holocaust) but Stalin's terror was many times more horrific and right in front of the world's eyes, yet most have no idea. I am so very glad to see you posting again, my friend. You are eloquent, intelligent and appreciated.

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